Shadow Major
Deliverer
Current project: The Realm Wanderer
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Post by Shadow Major on May 17, 2012 0:36:29 GMT -5
Your definitely getting better with the hair, it looks much more natural. The shoulder appears to be a little small to me, not much to say other than that. Mm, shoulders do indeed look a little smaller than they should... I followed your advice about the quick strokes with the hair though, so thanks!
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Post by cn3wton on May 20, 2012 17:21:13 GMT -5
No problem. I forgot who/where I got that advice but it has helped me out greatly.
I would really like to see you try and get more of the characters body into the drawing.
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Post by Caliber Mengsk on May 21, 2012 15:27:40 GMT -5
It also looks like she's shrugging so hard he arm might pop out of the socket, from the angle of view.
Even though you are trying to keep the angles straight and everything from perspective, the body isn't quite so angular. The shoulders slope downward, and if this pic, they are going straight across, giving improper perspective on the shoulder compared to the rest of the body.
O-o if any of that made sense and didn't sound like rambling, I'd be surprised XD
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Shadow Major
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Current project: The Realm Wanderer
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Post by Shadow Major on May 21, 2012 22:45:31 GMT -5
I understand how she looks like she's shrugging too much, and I kinda get an idea of what you're trying to say ;D
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Post by cn3wton on Sept 16, 2012 8:43:29 GMT -5
The indication of the collar bone is a little too far to the left. It is also too flat. His body is turned to the left, so the collar bone turns with that. Also the right arm (while off the page) looks like it attaches in a funky way to his body.
As far as the face the eyes seem a little big to me, but I think thats just your style. I would try making the outlines of the eyes a little bit lighter though.
These are all very nit picky things though. You've gotten alot better at tons of different things. I suggest doing some life studies of people to beef up your anatomy skills. But great job man.
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Shadow Major
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Current project: The Realm Wanderer
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Post by Shadow Major on Sept 17, 2012 0:39:57 GMT -5
The indication of the collar bone is a little too far to the left. It is also too flat. His body is turned to the left, so the collar bone turns with that. Also the right arm (while off the page) looks like it attaches in a funky way to his body. As far as the face the eyes seem a little big to me, but I think thats just your style. I would try making the outlines of the eyes a little bit lighter though. These are all very nit picky things though. You've gotten alot better at tons of different things. I suggest doing some life studies of people to beef up your anatomy skills. But great job man. Thanks! And you couldn't be more right. From here on in, it's all anatomical study for me!
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Shadow Major
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Current project: The Realm Wanderer
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Post by Shadow Major on Dec 3, 2012 20:20:52 GMT -5
Hey again guys, here is what I think will be my final concept of my main character: As always, feel free to leave comments and critiques below, thanks!
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Post by neilsugg on Feb 5, 2013 2:03:51 GMT -5
I think you're very good
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Shadow Major
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Current project: The Realm Wanderer
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Post by Shadow Major on Feb 5, 2013 3:43:19 GMT -5
I think you're very good Thanks!
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Post by PJCzar on Feb 5, 2013 18:44:10 GMT -5
great work with shading in the watercolor painting. thats something ive never been able to do. youve certainly got heads, faces and hair down. now for the hard part, bodies and legs lol. or atleast its hard for me.
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Shadow Major
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Current project: The Realm Wanderer
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Post by Shadow Major on Feb 5, 2013 23:14:30 GMT -5
great work with shading in the watercolor painting. thats something ive never been able to do. youve certainly got heads, faces and hair down. now for the hard part, bodies and legs lol. or atleast its hard for me. Much appreciated! ;D I've still got a bit to do with honing my skills in watercolour. Haha, I started on bodies for a bit, then did faces again for a bit, but now I should just focus on bodies. And I agree. It is hard!
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Post by cn3wton on Feb 22, 2013 19:49:02 GMT -5
Gotta draw full figures man!
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Shadow Major
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Current project: The Realm Wanderer
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Post by Shadow Major on Feb 23, 2013 2:25:56 GMT -5
Gotta draw full figures man! Haha! I GOTTA!! ;D
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