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Post by PJCzar on Feb 4, 2009 20:19:46 GMT -5
Heres my 2nd half of my pages for this turn. =) I done now. pjczar.deviantart.com/art/Collab-comic-Tribe-pg5-PJczar-111830630And about the super powers thing dont you think it would be way more intrueging if you didnt so that random extras coulde be braught in to die like a human and the fights would be more realistic and more of a struggle with no handi-caps like that. now mabey if it was like year 2400 or something then i could see it but as far as ive gathered by calibermengsks first drawins based on the cop car Id guess its still within the years of 2080. which is way before any human evolution like described. However minor technological advanced would have been achived being that our technology doubles every 2 years (proven fact) so mabey a few little mech things would be acceptable to me but then again these are vigilantes, so they arent exactly well funded for that kind of stuff. (lols they base them selves in a sewer xP) but you know its which ever way you guys wanna take it untill its my turn. I personally oppose supernatural effects in a story like this. As well as massive mech suits or stuff like that. If it goes that way i dunno if i could stick witht his. (dont take that as me holding myself hostage at the ransom of not doing it.)
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Post by Crombie on Feb 4, 2009 21:21:28 GMT -5
okay then we'll give him a few little droid like grenades that can like walk out in a crowd and knock everyone unconcious, or explode or something random you know like small mech robots that he can use to do varius things such climb up walls. hmmm how bout anti gravity boots. or a glove with a built in flame thrower or have it attached with special liquid nitrogen that allows him to blow out a burst of icey wind out of his hand and freeze everythin? oh wait what if we just made an ultimate like weapon and make the villain get it. and make him have to find the creater and get a similar weapon that way there not fighting with magic but a ton of different body mechs wired to where they can control it with the thoughts focused on in there mind. allowing them to control there attacks. does that work?
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Post by Caliber Mengsk on Feb 4, 2009 21:45:09 GMT -5
So are you done then PJCzar?
I just don't want this to get outrageously abstract Yajiko. (and the walking grenades thing reminded me of Bob-oms from Mario. XD Not saying it's a bad idea. Just stating what popped into my head.) The tech can be kinda spiffy, but they are living in a sewer to keep a low profile, so something like a full Gundam sized mech wouldn't work too well.
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Post by Crombie on Feb 4, 2009 21:51:09 GMT -5
i know i'm saying more like a body suit like mech that was built by a mad scientist or something. you know something completely random that makes no sense but every one like it, or would you preffer he beats up robots like they do in sonic X. plus i PJczar has one more page doesn't he?
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Post by PJCzar on Feb 5, 2009 14:49:53 GMT -5
nope im done just the 2 pages is gunna be enough from me for now...
we are now set up for the next scene...
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Post by Crombie on Feb 8, 2009 22:50:25 GMT -5
awe man this means its my turn. hmmm i wonder how i'm gonna make this work. well i doon't wanta jump a head with the mechs and what not so instead i'll be kinda passive on my turn and just show them talking in the chow hall with the other vigilantes. plus i see that pjczar has added in the character of phillip. i'm not sure if he's perminate or not but if he is tell me. any way. i guess umm can i make a character i wanta add in be an anma like character. you know human with like a tail and animal like ears, and say he was a genetic engineering experiment that was gonna be tested for research and had broken out and made a run for it into the sewers, and just happened to meet them there?
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Post by PJCzar on Feb 9, 2009 0:25:10 GMT -5
lol anma xP The philip thing i was hoping to go like this he is a permanent character that is sortof like a informant... pops in every once and a while and helps in person but mostly just suplies info on differant things trake needs
and about the anma thing if i was gunna do that id have them all siting there eating then they hear yelling and look somehwree else and see that anma thing being captured by the Tribe's guards then can bring him in somehow with the story.
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Post by Crombie on Feb 9, 2009 21:48:57 GMT -5
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Post by Crombie on Feb 9, 2009 23:03:22 GMT -5
umm scratch that i mean wednsday night i gotta soccer game tommorrow night sry. and i won't have time to work on it during the game.
oh, and shouldn't we have it on the artist comments a page forward and page backwards thing like ya know a link to the next page due to its on someone elses profile. and yeah everyone plz put it on deviant art that way ppl don't have to change websites to read it.
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Post by kylec on Feb 10, 2009 17:14:52 GMT -5
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Post by Caliber Mengsk on Feb 10, 2009 17:28:51 GMT -5
Pretty much you just wing it. XD
Like I said before, it's kind of like passing the stick around the campfire.
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Post by Crombie on Feb 10, 2009 23:01:48 GMT -5
ummmm this might be some really bad news i'm not gonna be able to continue on this for a while cause yeah ummm i got a 55 F in honors english 11 and i have to get that up so ummm just pass it the next guy after i turn in one more page and take me off the list till i get out of trouble. kay?
yeah i got 2 Ds and an F on progress reports so i'm in deeep deeep trouble guys and yeah i'm like in the top 20 of my class and this is gonna drop me out of the ranks if i don't do something and fast okay i gotta go focus for a an upcoming physics and precalculus test this week so i'll upload my other page saturday and then you can take me off till summer or when my grades go up. sry. =(
LOL i put on there two Ds HAHAHA! OMG thats so freakin hilarious HAHAHA!! two Ds! HA!
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Post by howlvlog on Feb 12, 2009 8:42:12 GMT -5
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Post by PJCzar on Feb 12, 2009 15:08:17 GMT -5
OK so seeing as how Yajiko has temporarily dropped out till further notice we just need to Caliber to update the initial post which gives info for whos in it and what order.
Caliber, I would suggest we go to animeismylife now and replace Yajiko with howlvlog when it comes to order of turns.
Thanks for joining up howlvlog
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Post by Thauib on Feb 12, 2009 15:12:17 GMT -5
I've sent Caliber a message....
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Post by kylec on Feb 12, 2009 16:26:27 GMT -5
and me?
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Post by PJCzar on Feb 12, 2009 16:28:13 GMT -5
oh snap sorry kylec i had not seen yyour entry =( i feel bad now
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Post by kylec on Feb 12, 2009 16:29:31 GMT -5
np, just didnt want to be put in the back of the order.
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Post by howlvlog on Feb 12, 2009 19:00:50 GMT -5
So, when is my turn exactly? So I don't get kicked off. I'm horrible with dates. xD
I read what we are supposed to do, but I wanna make sure. We can turn the comic in which ever direction we desire, as long as it is appropriate and reasonable?
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Post by PJCzar on Feb 12, 2009 21:40:58 GMT -5
right now you and kylec dont have a turn, only because calibermengsk (guy incharge of this) hasnt comeonline yet and read these newer posts.
and yes you can turn the story anyway you want as long as its appropriateand reasonable like you said.
so just hang on a little while guys and you will be put in order. =)
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Post by Crombie on Feb 12, 2009 23:03:39 GMT -5
wow no comment about my grades. i mean really i like nearly flunked right outta school. i'm like having to work my arms and limbs opff just to get them up to Bs and Cs, hopefully i can get an A in one of em. anyway i didn't know we had to do the homework to actually no the material on the test. wow i just fidured that out by the way. so now i'm studying like crazy and assigning myself extra homework just to make sure i get the material. WAH! i never thought i'd give myself homework. ugh!!
ps i'll join back when i get my grades up okay. till next time oh and the Anima characters name is Kyoko. GOT IT?!
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Post by Caliber Mengsk on Feb 13, 2009 4:28:53 GMT -5
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o-o.... I really should check up on things more often. @_@ I'll be sure to clear everything up in the morning.... (... my morning... I get up kinda late.) Right now I'm too tired and have a slight headache, so I'm not able to get things straight in my head. T_T
Till tomorrow...
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Post by Caliber Mengsk on Feb 13, 2009 13:08:41 GMT -5
Ok... Sorry for the double post...
Anyway, To start off, the next person is Animeismylife... though, I haven't seen them logged in since a day or two after they joined. (AKA I think it's actually unlikely that they will really be joining us, though I could be wrong.) After that, the order you get put in line is the order you joined.
I have been pretty much accepting everyone that request to join. XD I just don't update the first post very often.
As far as Yajiko; I am just going to mark your name in the list somehow to show that your still part of the group, but you aren't going to be active in the turn list until you ask to be. I fully understand the school thing. (In college, I did most of my classes in the last two weeks of class. In Java, I literally did nothing 'til that time and then did it all and still got an A.)
OK.... I think... that's all of the topics of discussion... Did I miss anything?
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Post by Thauib on Feb 13, 2009 13:12:14 GMT -5
So am I in?! O.O
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Post by Caliber Mengsk on Feb 13, 2009 20:10:09 GMT -5
Yep, I just have to edit the people that have joined it. (You are the last to join so far, so your last in line. Two or three people in front of you.)
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Post by kylec on Feb 15, 2009 8:45:33 GMT -5
So is animeismylife going for his turn or what? He hasn't posted in a while.
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Post by Caliber Mengsk on Feb 15, 2009 14:33:04 GMT -5
Her for one, and by the looks of it, she probably won't (she hasn't logged in since Jan 19th... meaning almost a month ago.) but either way, We'll give her another day to say that she's working on it at least. If nothing tomorrow (Monday) then she'll be skipped.
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Post by kylec on Feb 17, 2009 16:35:39 GMT -5
Well I don't think she is coming on. I think I will start on mine when you give me the go. Sound good?
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Post by Thauib on Feb 17, 2009 21:35:46 GMT -5
so I'm last in line? Kool...
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Post by Caliber Mengsk on Feb 18, 2009 1:25:20 GMT -5
You have a go Kylec. (I'll update the first post to have all of the new people in it tomorrow... XD I'm too lazy tonight.)
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