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Post by PJCzar on Oct 23, 2009 15:18:41 GMT -5
yeah i didnt do any shading on it yet ill be doing that on monday thanks also
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Post by PJCzar on Dec 5, 2009 2:45:06 GMT -5
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Post by PJCzar on Feb 23, 2010 20:02:38 GMT -5
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Post by PJCzar on May 16, 2010 1:06:35 GMT -5
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Post by PJCzar on Nov 19, 2010 4:21:39 GMT -5
woo! new art! hah. 4 months wow. hmm. I do have drawings form those 4 months but they are only sketches for a storyboard for the animation i was working on but lost ALL of. feelsbadman.jpeg oh well I was at my girl's house on sunday and we where drawing after dinner and since she was drawing chibi i thought id try. as much as i dont like drawing "cute" or "girly" things it came out good enough for her to be jealous.  MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA oh and i drew a flag and some dude runnning saying lol also a chibi. theres more but they are really no good. here... Attachments:
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Post by aznboi3 on Nov 19, 2010 20:09:42 GMT -5
Hey there PJCzar i think your art is great and there is just one thing I'de like to say.
You can try to add a few more colors to your skin tones and clothing i try to have at least 3 colors in everything for definition. Adding more can make your image look much better.
Other than that keep going! ^^
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Post by PJCzar on Nov 21, 2010 10:32:04 GMT -5
Hey there PJCzar i think your art is great and there is just one thing I'de like to say. You can try to add a few more colors to your skin tones and clothing i try to have at least 3 colors in everything for definition. Adding more can make your image look much better. Other than that keep going! ^^ yeah thanks im definatly trying to get that point but i just cant do skin colors or color shades in general very good yet because my mind still hangs up on the lines wihc im still not completely happy with. thanks for the words of encouragment |
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Post by PJCzar on Dec 2, 2010 2:33:00 GMT -5
This wouldn't be a double post if this forum was more active but oh well. a chibi, err, 2 chibi's, one is me and the other is my girlfriend. she was kind enough to take a picture of the drawing cause i left it at her house. those where the clothes we wore that day. and i tried to get more shading into it. Attachments:
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Post by PJCzar on Dec 2, 2010 5:03:31 GMT -5
Heres another picture i just finished. now im going to bed. I drew it on iscribble.net and its all mouse drawn. i thought id try differant emotions and keep the skin white so the face can be seen better. Its supposed to look like an epic version of me. although i dont see how thats possible but whatever. i dunno why i put the bubbles of color i thought i looked retro cool. dealwithit.jpeg * *inside joke for the bros everything went better then expected.  Attachments:
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Post by PJCzar on Jan 21, 2011 21:44:15 GMT -5
New drawing! I watched 'Fight Club' decided life is too short to waste worrying about money and jobs and decided to be happy, so i drew this. pjczar.deviantart.com/art/Girl-with-short-hair-194391902oh and if someone wants to color it or something go ahead id really like to see what it would look like in color but I suck at coloring. |
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Post by dvandom on Jan 22, 2011 13:12:22 GMT -5
Quick and obvious critique: asymmetric eyes. While the iris touches the edge the same way on one edge, you have white space around one eye and not the other. It makes her look like she got a little too close to fight club and took an elbow.
---Dave
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Post by PJCzar on Jan 22, 2011 19:43:54 GMT -5
lol yeah i saw that too. i figured with as much of a close up as it is it would seem as if she is actually looking at you.
another thing, i measures the eyes and the right on (her left) is a couple millimeters larger which amplifies the white area alot more then i thought i could.
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Post by Caliber Mengsk on Feb 4, 2011 18:29:04 GMT -5
*Falls out of chair* (O)_(O)..... Girl with short hair.... creepy.... eyes...... *Curls up in ball and starts rocking back and forth* ......... (Just to note.... it really freaks me out... T____T) EDIT: Oh, and looking back at some of your pics, you said you did the line art in flash. If you have it, you may want to try using paths and stroke them in photoshop. Gets an inked kind of effect. I made a video tutorial on me doing it with one of my drawings a while ago. I think it's a great effect. www.youtube.com/watch?v=eXE9ShVZPBg |
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Post by PJCzar on Jun 17, 2011 0:41:27 GMT -5
its been a long time. Ive drawn some really wicked samurai as of late and i intend to upload them at some point in the next couple of days. (friday probably)
this post os to build excitement. lol im a PR master
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Post by vortexblast on Jun 17, 2011 1:56:27 GMT -5
its been a long time. Ive drawn some really wicked samurai as of late and i intend to upload them at some point in the next couple of days. (friday probably) this post os to build excitement. lol im a PR master I thought that you were supposed to be away for 2 years? Guess that I was wrong. |
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Post by PJCzar on Jun 17, 2011 17:04:56 GMT -5
I was going to go then i got offered a good job in digital design, so i weighed my options and i thought hey i can do this now and got o the forest later, im in no rush.
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Post by PJCzar on Jul 2, 2011 16:56:08 GMT -5
MY 2011 gallery pjczar.deviantart.com/gallery/31207222there are more but I dot know where and I want to use the scanner when I do those so these will have to be enough for now  I drew a bunch of samurai. Also I'm writing a short story and drawing the characters so ill upload those and *send out a link* to the story once it is done. * it isnt exactly a child safe story so yeah |
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Post by PJCzar on Oct 2, 2011 1:01:14 GMT -5
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Post by Caliber Mengsk on Oct 3, 2011 11:48:46 GMT -5
I always forget if you are wanting critique on this post or not, but if you don't, just ignore this post. (could be useful to someone else reading too ) Anyway, You do really well on the basic lines of everything, in general, but it seems a fair amount of your poses are pretty stiff. Take the attached image for example. The legs are extremely straight up and down, and are placed very close together. This makes the character feel like they are leaning when you put one leg back like you did to try and get the depth effect. Here's a pic of a person standing in almost the same pose, except for the arms. www.stellarcc.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/10/standing.png All I typed in with the google image search was standing and this was in the first row. Don't be afraid to use references. Even a girl can be a reference to a standing pose for a guy. You aren't looking for the body shape in this case, just the posture, and posture will make your drawings more believable. It's not always true, but is in many cases. Other then that, there isn't anything major. Maybe try drawing just poses? Faceless people without much detail or clothing. This helped me a lot. I have a good 30+ drawings of people like that. In this case you aren't working on details of the face, or body, or hair, or clothing, specifically pose. I also suggest shading but that's up to you. Proper shading can make a pic that was only meh look amazing. |
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Post by dvandom on Oct 3, 2011 18:19:15 GMT -5
Remember, if it's in Art Talk, you assume people want critiques. The showing off board is for things people don't want critiques on. ---Dave |
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Post by PJCzar on Oct 4, 2011 20:52:09 GMT -5
I always take critiques so i just put it all in this one. I see what you mean about the legs caliber. These are just overly worked on sketches that i had no intention of finishing when i started them. I was just doodling the ideas my friend came up with as he said them, through them together to make these. I do agree i need to work on the stiffness of all my poses. But i also like to mention that i stand stiffly in real life and so do poeple I know. Not every moment is a relaxed one and as a result i try to add a touch of stiffness, it seems too much though I will work on it. |
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Post by PJCzar on Nov 16, 2011 2:48:45 GMT -5
My latest and probably greatest work of original art ive ever done. me (with shield) and 3 of my friends (+15 years of age) in medieval gear about to fight a large troll. Colors are not final, these are just mock up colors to see if my friends are ok with their characters outfit color. Shading will be added when i go over the colors. Please point out any errors i made or usual critiques. Attachments:
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Post by PJCzar on Mar 5, 2012 2:37:12 GMT -5
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Post by PJCzar on Dec 3, 2012 18:31:37 GMT -5
some cool thing i drew for the back of a business card. more art coming soon... i guess. Attachments:
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Post by PJCzar on Feb 23, 2013 14:12:33 GMT -5
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Post by PJCzar on May 25, 2013 3:12:26 GMT -5
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Post by Shadow Major on May 25, 2013 21:45:44 GMT -5
Your style's really starting to show through man  Nice progress, keep it up!! |
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Nice progress, keep it up!!