new comic thingy im in the middle of doing

[grovnak]

Soo this is my first post on this site EVER!!
And I starting writing this comics story for about a few months now..
And I just now TODAY started to draw it..
I would love some criticism please..
Ok soo it reads left to right like the western stufffff..
And soooo sorry I had to take the pic with my phone, I don't have a skanner..



Sorry about the size..

[grovnak]

Oh!! Just a an update.. its not supposed to look like anime/ manga.. its my own style that I've been drawing for a wile now..