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Post by dvandom on Apr 7, 2012 18:22:15 GMT -5
Lighting looks good. A few tweaks on the guns:
Right hand gun looks kinda flat...even if the long shaft is supposed to be rectangular, it could use a little shading to give it thickness.
Left hand gun grip still looks hard to hold, maybe remove the black lines down the middle and let shading alone carry the shape? That'd soften the grip.
---Dave
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Shadow Major
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Current project: The Realm Wanderer
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Post by Shadow Major on Apr 8, 2012 0:08:23 GMT -5
I agree with dvandom about the guns issue, but other than that, it looks really cool!
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Post by leucome on Apr 8, 2012 17:30:52 GMT -5
Thanks Good idea to remove the line in the gun grip. I also reduced line thickness of the 2 guns. I inked those lines too tick. And i done many other small change everywhere. Attachments:
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Post by dvandom on Apr 9, 2012 6:43:21 GMT -5
Caption: "Look, there's nothing to worry about! Even if there ARE monsters here, these babies will make short work of 'em!"
---Dave
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Post by leucome on Apr 9, 2012 19:45:02 GMT -5
Ha ha ! Sure. I am quite happy I sold one print . But it's an unusual request. He wished to have one that fit a fender strat guitar to laminate the print on the body .
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Post by leucome on Apr 10, 2012 0:52:04 GMT -5
Today progress .. A fight with the creature .. but before she got those crazy guns .lol I spended almost all my time on doing test . Inking test. Because i get better at inking but i still got really jaggy line 9 time out of 10 . I even tought that i have some kind of input trouble between my tablet and photoshop . I tried doing the same exact stroke many time time on paper, photoshop, and pait sai, And line got trouble only in photoshop. So i tried the trace ink (Pen tool) in photoshop for the first time and i like it! It smooths my stroke and I can render the line with other brushes and tickness . I alson done the girl on the botom left with paint sai (just the line not the hatching) It was so easy to get clen line i was almost amased . Attachments:
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Post by dvandom on Apr 10, 2012 6:41:36 GMT -5
Definitely shorten the rear of the gun. It's way too short to be a pistol stock, but there's no mechanical reason to have the grip that far forward otherwise, it's wasted space at the back of the gun.
---Dave, knows he's picking on the guns a lot, but it does seem to be your weak spot....
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Post by leucome on Apr 12, 2012 21:44:52 GMT -5
She is firing .. I have not inked the fire the hole in the monster and the blood . But it was suposed to be the damper but i made a mistake for sure because only the upper part of the gun move backward.
ANd i can had the hole where the roud is expelled .. and also adding the empty roud propelled out of the gun can be nice little detail
Thanks ..
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Post by leucome on May 15, 2012 1:39:17 GMT -5
I made 9mm desing similar to a Glock and a redraw almost every pages where there are a gun .. It's not 100% as good as a wish but my time budget run out . Attachments:
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