My best drawn art so far

[vortexblast]

Hey guys, I'm back after 6 months of abscence from this forum. I just want to share this drawing that I've finished not too long ago.

What do you think?

[PJCzar]

welcome back. This is a very good piece, the choatic feel is certainly there and im assuming its intentional. thats something i have a problem doing, intentional chaos, so i know when i see it done right. The proportions look good every where but 1 spot.
The right elbow, the one in the claw/glove, is mishappen some how. The elbow crease is odd because the way the forarm meets the upper arm is odd. the lower arm has almost no width to it and has almost a stick figure like joint for an elbow. That said you did try to prevent this and i will say it is a d**ned hard thing to get right, elbows. Like i said though, this work is excelent and i hope you produce more of this caliber in the future.

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[vortexblast]

Thanks for at least replying and give some thought about it.
The elbow has been fixed in some extent, it still looks a tiny bit wrong but it's not that bad. Although I really would like to draw things that are a bit more dynamic, maybe for a later date.
I've drawn two more drawings, this time. They're simple face drawings. One straight in the face and one at the profile.

I'm not too happy with how the guy on the left turned out, there's an air of oldness and stiffness but I'm certainly pleased with the profile of the woman on the right.
I could not scan it since I drew it on my school yearbook.

[Shadow Major]

Just a thought, perhaps the nostril is a little too high on the woman's profile drawing? Also, the guy's jawbone is not properly balanced; i.e. the right side is somewhat higher than the left, but this is a problem that gets me every time, it's hard to get them perfect. All in all, these are very well done drawings! ;D